NAME :
RINDU PERKASA
STUDENT ID NUMBER : 1300951
CLASS : K2
My
Experience During Studying Paragraph Writing
I studied Paragraph Writing with Mr. Saunir and Mrs.
Witri. These two lectures were different in teaching. Mr. Saunir prefered to
ask his students to learn a topic by themselves. This way makes me find almost
all I need to know by myself. Based on my experience, I would understand about
a topic better when I learned it first by myself. On the other hand, Mrs Witri
implemented another way. She spent a meeting to explain about a kind of text
that we were going to write. In addition, she was always ready to clarify my
wrong perceptions. I had longer time to ask her any questions. In brief, the different
ways of the lectures were really helpful. I could understand about a topic
well.
Writing is not as easy as it sounds. I Faced so many difficulities during my
Paragraph Writing class. It started from the basic step : find a topic. I am a
kind of person who wants something different. That is why I hard to find a
topic to write. As a sample, when we talk about descriptive text, most people
tend to write about their homes or famous tourism spots. As a result, I have to
think deeply to find a different one. To make a good paragraph I need something
unique that I am interested in. The second one is creating the sentences sounds
naturally. English is a foreign language. To be able producing natural foreign
language needs a long period. In addition, the problem does not stop in our
ability in producing natural sentences, but it also has to be accepted as an
academic sentence in appropriate rules.
I do not care about the mark that I have got in a course
as long as I did not fail and got an acceptable GPA wherever I looking for a
job. I belive that a mark does not warrant someone’s skill althought I hope for
a perfect mark. No matter what I have got and what I will get, the most
important one is I have to do the best of me.
great grammar and diction of words, Rindu... uphold it.
BalasHapusYou should be attention about punctuation. However, It is a good essay rindu. Good job.
BalasHapuskeep about your punctuation ,,
BalasHapusI agree with you win :)
pay attention about the punctuation,
BalasHapusand your second essay is too short, i think.
I don't mean to say even I am smart, because we are same learning. when I read your essay, there are a few mistakes. for me, it is sufficient good. if it's compared with mine that not be far different. nice job :)
BalasHapusI think your essay was great. it was quite coherence, but it is still little short. so, try to develop your ideas again. Go ahead Rindu.
BalasHapusWhat a great essay bg. :)
BalasHapusndak adoh yang selain ''what a great essay'' ko comment nyo lai -_-
Hapusgood essay. pay more attention on your grammar
BalasHapusGreat experience!!!!
BalasHapusI have read it for many times and you have made it better...
Do not forget to pay attention on your grammar.
Yours are better than me I thought, I should learn more bang rindu
BalasHapusyour essay is good. keep writing ndu!! :)
BalasHapuswhat a great essay bang :)
BalasHapus